It was disturbingly perfect and
Pixy didn’t much care for it. Every time
she drove her beat up old van down the street and pulled into the adjunct
parking garage she counted herself a traitor.
She belonged down the way in some broken down studio apartment where she
could take a shower and cook breakfast at the same time, not in a place with bulletproof
windows stretching from the floor to the ceiling tinted for privacy and UV
protection. It was all too grand for a
guttersnipe who’d crawled out from the slums of East Tenny where she’d had to
wear a gas mask to bed each and every night because it was too expensive to run
a ventilation system at the boarding house.
Bad air and bad people. That’s all
Pixy had ever known and that’s all she reckoned she deserved. But not Prim.
Prim deserved the best.
The van sputtered
wetly as it came to a stop reminding her that it was running on borrowed time. Grabbing hold of her large duffle bag filled
with stripper clips, boxes of ammo, an electronic dossier with a full terabyte of
information on wanted men and women between the 90th and 80th
parallels, and one of Prim’s old beat up nightshirts, Pixy stepped out of the
large cumbersome vehicle. It had gang
tags all over it, some of which she’d painted herself. It was grunge art on four wheels and she was
acutely aware of how much it pissed off her well-to-do neighbors that her piece
of crap reconstructed Transit took up space in their otherwise illustrious showroom
of a garage, but the worse her ride looked, the better it was for bounty
hunting. Shiny didn’t last long in the places she went,
but no one bothered much over a vandalized hunk of rusted metal. That and she needed the room for transport; once
in a great while her employer sent her on jobs that only paid out if the mark
was brought in alive. She hated those
jobs. It was so much easier when ‘dead
or’ was part of the deal.
Pixy
rounded the van and tugged the charger cable from its hiding spot beneath the
grille. She plugged it in and waited
long enough to make sure the connection was secure then she headed into the building
proper.
The entire
complex was ventilated; once inside the air was breathable, but in all the
years she’d lived here with Prim, she’d never removed her mask before reaching
her apartment. Today was no
exception. The front deskman nodded at
her, just as he always did, as she ran her key card under the scanner.
“Nice
weather we’re having,” he said and smiled.
“The best,”
she curtsied and moved past him toward the lift. The deskman, despite evidence that he was a
living, breathing human, seemed very much like a robot. She’d never seen his lower half as he was
always seated at his post no matter the day or hour, and for all she knew he
was nothing more than an upper torso, arms, and head constructed for the sole
purpose of greeting passing residents with one of four lines of dialogue, two
of which were passé commentaries on the weather. One of these days she’d pinch him and see if
he had a preset response for that, too.
The lift
was a cylinder composed primarily of glass and it traveled along a vertical
tube servicing all ten stories of condominiums.
Pixy pressed the Roman numeral for five and then leaned against the
smooth handrail that ran the circumference of the see through car. Across from her was a ghostly reflection,
distorted by the curvature of the glass.
Her hair, which, that morning, had started out in a bun, was now a fallen,
knotted mess and there was dirt all around her eyes and on her forehead.
“I’m gonna
look like a raccoon when I finally take this damn mask off,” she said and chuckled. Then she frowned. She turned her head a little and her reflection
went wide until it distorted into nothing. Prim often told her that she was
beautiful, but if there was a pretty girl under all that grime, under the
expanse of gas mask, Pixy had never seen her.
The upward
motion of the lift slowed to a stop. A
soft ping sounded. The doors opened up
to the fifth level and she stepped gingerly out into the corridor. Her door was the first one on the right.
If she hadn’t
been wearing her stiletto boots, she might have skipped her way home, but she
knew Prim wouldn’t approve of a rolled ankle, so she just walked as quickly as
she could, eagerness speeding her step and making the last few moments of her
journey seem to take forever.
Wow, your writing has a nice flow that makes it very easy to read. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Christine. It means a lot to me that you are reading it and enjoying it. ^_^
DeleteI like this! It's very "dystopian" without slapping you in the face with it. The little details set it well so if your reader's paying attention, they know that this isn't "Our" world anymore. My favorite line was probably when the van "sputtered wetly". It's so gross and delightful.
ReplyDeleteIf you don't mind a tiny critique, I will say the "like a sore thumb" phrase is a bit out of place. The sentence would probably look just fine without it.
Thank you so much and yeah, I had actually debated on that line lol. I think you're right and that it would be just fine without it. I don't mind critique at all, thank you muchly. <3
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